Opps.. i stopped for quite some time.. no inspiration at this moment but after hearing my neighbour next door playing on her piano .. well inspiration kind of struck me on how to begin the second day ..
" Hmm what pleasant melody. I guess today will be great !" Ken said to himself as he raised up slowly from his bed. He then stood discreetly behind his sister, Rachel who is playing on her piano elegantly.
Rachel finished the piece and breathe out as if she had done something magnificently. Behind her, was Ken who was clapping for her. " Well good piece down there!! I didnt know you played so well .." Ken praised her but reply from Rachel was that she blamed Ken for not staying at home oftens as he could already know what pieces she playing.
" Well well .. anyway thank :) but you are going to be late for school !! " Rachel replied and Ken discovered that he was late for school and immediately rushed to change his clothes.
" Dont rush !! Anyway breakfast is already prepared for you .. heh.." Rachel joked and Ken quickly finished his breakfast and hurried to school.
Apparently he was late for his math lesson.
" ermm Mmmorning Mrs Ggoohhh =) .." Ken greeted the Math Teacher.. but apparently he got scolded by her and got ordered to return to his seat immediately. He later wondered where Sheryl was but realised that she doesnt need to come for this lesson as she told him about yesterday..
Since Ken forgetted that Sheryl did not come .. well he also forgetted to bring his lesson material as well .. Mrs Goh got nothing to say except to tell him to figure out himself. The first thing that came into his mind was to quickly find someone to share it with him.. therefore hastly he sit beside Felicia.
As Felicia was that type of super shy girl, she panicked when Ken suddenly sit beside him. Well she was totally lost at her reaction. Anyway Ken didnt know about her, he saw her often in school but didnt talked to her before, so he greet her..
" Morning!" Ken greeted her using the most common sentence..However Felicia didnt reply him at all.. This was when Ken questioned himself whether she was ignoring her or didnt heard him.. so he greeted her again. But theres still no answers from her.
* scribble * *scribble*
A handwritten words by Felicia soon appear at the foolscrap in front of Ken. Ken was kinda surprised that she used that to reply him .. and for Ken.. he didnt knew that Felicia was so shy.. but nonetheless.. he intro himself and she intro herself as well .. yup all in written form.
While they were "chatting" halfway, Jack threw bits of rubber to get his attention. Ken then look back at Jack who was holding onto the paper which written " Someone ..Lovely dovely in action .." Ken was then like showing to him that its not happened to be what he was thinking.
On the other hand.. Mrs goh took this chance whereby both of them was not listening to class, asked Ken a question on Math. Apparently, Ken didnt manage to even understand what the question ..
" Omg im dead .. damn Jack basket ...zzz" Ken thinking of whats going to happen to him as everyone fear the prowess of Mrs Goh. Just then.. Felicia tapped Ken on his pant and he look down, well basically what he saw saved his life (for now..)
Well .. whats written by felicia was some super detailed answer about the math question and Ken even wondered how she wrote that so fast ...
Again.. as usual he thanked her for it but instead of getting the " You're welcome" response .. he got this response from her instead " You owned me one xP "
Well class ended and Jack and Darwin Ken went for work together ..
**Author note :
Well didnt manage to write some quality stuffs today .. i need to take note on my english now .. doesnt seem to be as good as the previous ones.. and also i'll be editing them soon as well soon after i introduced a new character ..
As for now .. Rachel is the name of his sister and yup the Day 2 # 2 will be on their work =)
" DAMN YOU !! KILL HIM !!! " The soldiers later charged at him ..
Ken did a loud roar and the body of the soldier freezed as their instinct tell them that its impossible to defeat him because of a obvious different in their power levels. And they seem to get ready to flee but was unable due to the fear in them.
" So now you should know the difference between you and i. I should let you go if you promised if you leave the girl safely behind."
The soldier reconfirm his request as they understand that it better to avoid this obvious winning without any loss of life.
"HAH!!!" The man behind laughed as if he wasnt even affected by Ken. Smokes surrounding him got thinner and the warrior with scythe appeared. " Lord Sire !! " the soldier cried. Ken then prepare to be on his guard as he knew that what lie ahead of him wasnt anyone like the Grams Soldiers but someone who is way above them.
Even with his heavy yet hardy scythe , Sire managed to leap up in the mid air with ease. Swinging his Scythe from the mid air at Ken, he came crashing down. He missed Ken but the earth which his scythe strike had just got flatten.
Soon, the battle between Sire and Ken begins but Ken's magical attack seem to be not effective against him. While fleeing, Ken manage to grab hold of few seconds to cast his icy bolt onto Sire but Sire's scythe slice through them like cucumber meeting cleaver..
"HAHAHA!! I wonder how long you going to avoid me ! This is futile !! You aint only the only magic user" Sire boasted and his hand got behind his back and glowed. Meanwhile Ken was no longer able to move..
" Crap a binding skill at this distance !" Ken panicked and this was when Sire approach him pointing the scythe at him. He laughed at Ken and told him that its over for him and for the girl ..
Ken at this time .. knowing what the situation he got and have little choice but to break the bind and to escape but unable to save girl if he does so. However after some time breaking the bind without letting Sire knowing.
Ken immediately flashed toward the girl and cast some magic around the girl. Soon ancient runes appears around the girl. However the magic circle was not formed yet and Ken was still casting it " Damn i got no time for everything .."
" HAHAHA I praised you for able to break my bind after taking so long .. but you still an amateur at spell casting" Sire approached Ken who was now beside the girl, preparing to cast the magical barrier around her.
Within seconds, the magical sphere was formed. It wasnt only just a simple protective barrier but also one that transfer people to others location. Ken ordered the girl to stay away from battles and told her to live her own life in other country. However the girl questioned him about whats going to happen to him. " Dont worry about me .. Ken replied followed by the scythe slashing through his body.
" NOOOOOOO~~!!! " The girl scream at the sight however she just now transferred to a safety location.
" I guess this is over " Ken said to himself and was now physical injured as well as he lost his will in fighting..
"Time for me to end this fight i mean this coward show. You wasnt even worth to be my opponent " Sire then swinge down his scythe at the severed injured Ken.
*POOOFFF* Before the scythe reach him, he vanished (pixelified ..)
"Hmm how warm this place is .. and i didnt know that heaven was this dark and glowing red. "
"Maybe i end in hell instead.. hahahaha .. .." Ken said to himself.
" Time havent come for you young man" a old man voice echoed the hall. It was Elder.
" I thought you said you got no enough energy for place shifiting spell.." Ken asked in surprised..
" Mind you young man, as you said .. im a triangle ranked elder mage.. dont you think that being among the few highest ranking mage, that i do not have enough energy for all these.. hahahaha .." the Elder laughed.
Later on being treated by his healing magic... the girl suddenly rush into the room and hug onto Ken.
"Miss not at this time.. he was still not recovered yet .." Elder said but Ken didnt mind at all .. The girl thanked Ken for saving her life and then bend toward Ken's face.
Both their eyes met and the girl later bend down and kissed him as a thank for rescuing her.
Ken didnt know how to react but to close his eyes.
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Well this had just ended .. yup the first part of the story had ended ..
P/S : Well good guys dont always win .. as hero always do foolish stuffs .. see impulse almost killed him ..
Audience reply : WTF DOES THIS GOT TO DO WITH SUMMER VACATION ???
This part occur at the very beginning of the whole story when you press > Start
The town of Travis is now engulf in the flames as soldiers of Grams had attacked it and set the fire to the whole village. The Grams Soldiers spare no mercy to the women and the children as they marched from towns to towns.
Triangle ranked mage of Travis who was showing this scene to Ken.
" What can i do to save them? " Ken questioned the mage as he cant bear to see them dying off like that.
The triangle ranked mage replied to Ken that its is already too late to save them as the town was already being engulfed by them and theres no one left for him to save.
Back at the town. The soldiers was enjoying the sight of the village burning and the suffering of the people.
" Sire.. seem like that this town is just like the previous ones HAHA!!" one of the Grams soldier exclaimed.. and another was saying that killing women are at least several times easier than hunting down wild animals for food.
While the soldiers was boasting.. suddenly a a sharp scream from a woman was heard from the town. Upon hearing that, Sire claimed that anyone who able to come back with her head will get rewarded by him. After this was commotions among the soldiers who later rushed into the town to hunt for that girl.
They finally found her crying beside a male corpse. She was holding onto the corpse and cried " Father!! Do not left me behind .. Open your eye please.. " Those sadist soldiers now began to surround her and that girl was now totally lost in what to do as she knew that she will be killed just like her father in no time.
Ken who currently on the other dimension saw it what happening. He then begged the mage to let him saved her.
" Elder .. let me save this girl she is going to get killed soon .." Ken begged..
However his elder refused as he said that its not worth risking his life just for saving someone if who is going to get killed and its too dangerous for him to solo all the Grams soldiers
" I dont care .. even if just only able to save 1 person.. im willingly to do so as its still counted saving a life . This is what you teach me since young" Ken replied without hesitant.
Elder finally agreed that he lets him go but later warned him that teleporting magic used up alot of his energy and its not possible to transfer him back after that. This posed a risk for Ken as he might not be able to return if he didnt manage to solo all the soldiers. Despite the warning , Ken insist that he wanted to go.
" You left me with no choice.. Go for it my child " as the elder opened up the magical portal for him. In lightning speed.. Ken dashed toward the portal.
Meanwhile at the town.. The soldiers who was surrounding the girl.
" ARGHH QUIT WHINNING!! WHY NOT JOIN YOUR FATHER " One of the soldier shouted and swinge down his halberd at her.
" GRRRAAAGGHHH~~~!!! " Somehow the halberd was holded by some invisible force and it break into 2 halves ..
" Hmm attacking female wasnt what a man should do.. " Ken said it as if he was so confident about winning it..
" DAMN YOU !! KILL HIM !!! " The soldiers later charged at him ..
P/S :
" Element of Ice. Bestows me your power. Anicent Vresh # XII Time Freeze!" Kah Beng chanted and the everyone got freezes halfway ...
" Hmm, lets wait until tomorrow for the battle .. im sleepy now .."
As for odex subtitle .. they probably love to do this " * chant * *chant*
Well i think i better confirm the age of Rachael now.
Well she is currently 12 Primary 6 and studying at the primary school same as her brotther, Ken. Anyway seem like her teacher know well enough of these siblings.
Background : At the point of time, Rachael PSLE examinations are coming in just a few months time. However she somehow got some personality from her brother as she didnt like to study and most of the time was browsing through manga and animes. Even though she didnt like to study but she can manage her studies well and often get distinctions for her subjects.
Character : Very Independent..Likes her brother alot, Ken as in sibling .Anyway like to to tease her brother alot by asking him question regarding girls in his class.
However .. Rachael herself didnt know much about her further studies and always hope to find some good guy to leech off lol.
Family life : Spend most of her time at home practising on piano. She stay at Ken's room oftenly when he is not at home as that is her source of her anime and manga. Currently their parents was not at home as they was having holiday oversea, therefore as a only female in the house, Rachael had to prepare breakfast and meals for herself and her brother. She is also the one who wakes Ken up every morning.
Ken - Rachael : Well they are sibling !! Anyway Ken oftens asked her stuffs about girls whenever he cant figured out what girls really like / dislike. Also Rachael will be able to watch animes and manga through Ken even though Ken dont really like her to get addicted to it.
Current events that relate to her :
Primary School Fun Fair,
Her piano competiton
PSLE
Last night was doing some graphic using Adobe Illustrator
Ok here is the menu of it
All i can say .. its still very very raw.. currently doing character design as for the clothing. Well been doing some sketching of uniform this morning.
Well i chosen Henderson Secondary School uniform .. since the story will be based over here.. and if it could be weird if i used salior style uniform.. Well currently change the realistic drawing into chibi form but not yet into electronic copies.. and only currently done the Male uniform .. cuz i dont have the girl sample.. not in my head though .. unless someone send me photos of hss girl uniform ..
Wouldnt it be freaking weird if i asked for it.. hey can i have a photo of you wearing your school uniform =) both front and back photos.. hmm
thats all .. using adobe illustrator to make the and color the uniform .. cya
After both Ken and Sheryl got kicked out of class by Mr Lee as they was disturbing the whole class.
Sheryl then tell Ken thats these type of punishment was very common as both of them got into trouble during primary school as well. Ken agreed and talk about one of the time when both of them got caught in cheating during spelling / dictation test. Both of them laughed.
* the following will be conversation *
Sheryl : Haha seem like this wasnt our first time back here again ..
Ken : Yup.. thank to you though..
Sheryl : You still remember during primary school .. whereby we always got kicked out in class ..
Ken : Yea.. not we got kicked out .. but in fact you the one who always land me into all these trouble...
Sheryl : haha ..
Ken : I still remember that time during primary 4 when you asked me for help during spelling test..
Sheryl : !!!
Sheryl : Oh that " personal " word
Ken : Yup that word which teacher caught us cheating and kicked us out of the class like now
Sheryl : Well lucky she didnt inform our parent
Ken : I killed you if she does =)
Ken : Anyway after that spelling test.. i saw you writing "Pencil" instead
Sheryl : Yeah cuz you didn't pronounce it properly
Ken : No! you the one who tell me how to write " Pencil "..
Ken : Hoho lousy poor hearing skills hmm.. but i know the word is "personal" though
Sheryl : Then why did you tell me !!??!!
Ken : Haha remember that our spelling test used word from the list given to us .. and pencil is not in there . I think you dont even bother to read it ..
Sheryl : heeh.. but writing them on spot seem to train me even better
Ken : yeah when you barely pass the test =.=
Sheryl : Haha so i can depend more on you heh..
Ken : ...
After some time .. Mr Lee called them back in. This was Jack told Ken whether they having some good time outside when Mr Lee was blabbering away. Darwin later int erupt by saying next time drag me down also .. yawn at his class..
After Mr Lee told them about the next lesson will have a Mini - Quiz. After that they were dismissed.
Together .. they went to the nearby plaza for lunch. As the food court was rather crowded therefore Sheryl had to book the seat for them and in return they will have to buy the food for her. But Sheryl didnt asked for what she want to eat.. therefore they asked her what she want
Darwin : btw what you want to eat
Sheryl : anything
Darwin : dont anything me okay? rice or noodle , western , soup?
Sheryl : noodle then
Darwin : specific thank =)
Sheryl : Ask Ken .. he should know better
Darwin called for Ken
Ken : What i buy for you?
Sheryl : ok if not nice then you have to pay for it wahahha!!
Ken : ...
After they came back buying the food .. somehow Ken bought meepok for her and she didnt like it and end up that Ken got to paid for her .. but he didnt and later on lead to a quarrel among them and somehow she end up going straight home. Soon after ken , jack and darwin finished their lunch and all of them went back home.
While ken was at the MRT platform.. he saw sheryl down there sort of waiting. But Ken didnt approach her..
Train arrived and both of them were in the same cabin but they didnt even talk.. after they got down in the same station.Ken approach her when both of them was walking on the path on their way home.
Ken : hmm sorry for just now.
Sheryl : ...
Ken : Sorry i didnt know you dont like meepok
Sheryl : ...
Ken : " How do i response ... she was like keep ..."
Sheryl : Actually there i like meepok .. but i was joking .. and wanted you to pay for me xD
Sheryl : and seem that i overdid it .. =/
Ken : ** i see i see ..**
Sheryl : well anyway you still remember that i like meepok
Ken : of course.. i cant remember any day not seeing you having meepok lol
Shery : haha glad that you still remember ..
Ken : huh?
Sheryl : ** oops i talked too much ** Anyway lift waiting for you .. byebye !!
This is when ken was confused about sheryl's word earlier on ...
Upon reaching home.. Ken was checking whos online .. and he received a message from Sheryl about that they should forget about today .. and half way Sheryl asked him about how to do the homework as she was not listening in class ( as usual..) ''
Ken : " Phew i thought she was serious that time .. "
At the evening, Ken went to jog at the park around his neighbourhood to relax. While jogging he met Darwin. Asking why Darwin was jogging at this time ..
Darwin said that his basketball competition was coming soon around this week and required to practise now.. This is when Ken asked himself whether why Darwin shd be training with his friend instead of running here. Well anyway Darwin later told Ken about Sheryl and asked whether things went fine between them. Ken replied by saying that it got settled and Darwin used this time to di-siao him about the power of childhood friend .. Ken got irritated and talk about darwin and jesscia. But Darwin later said that he didnt in good term with her as they agrued recently .. Ken later told him that he will try to help him out if he can ..
Anyway thats about the Day 1 . =)
This is a summary about whats going to happen in the story itself.
Start
Day 1 ( 1st June )
Going to school for supplementary lesson ..
- Sheryl's Past
- Ken's Past
Hanging out together at Tiong Bahru Plaza for movies and chats
- Ken Quarrel with Sheryl
Evening walk around the park
- Meet Darwin
- Darwin talks about his relationship problem with jesscia
Day 2 ( 2nd June)
Early morning
- Rachel's Playing waked Ken up
- Rachel's profile
- Realised that Ken is late for school
Going to school for supplementary lesson
- Late for Mrs Goh lesson
- Didnt bring material
- Had to sit with Felicia
- Intro Felicia
- Mini quiz that Mrs goh tested Ken
- Felicia helped Ken
Went to Work
- Sheryl came to disturb them
- Sheryl impost as customer and give Alex trouble
- Alex annoucned that new female staff coming
Day 3 ( 4th June )
Darwin's basketball competition
- Sheryl, Ken , Jack went to have a look
- Meet Jesscia
- Intro Jesscia's past about Darwin
- How Darwin meet her
- How Darwin get her (lol..)
- Jack left earlier
Working
- Ken , Jack , Darwin went to work
- Late for work (as usual)
- Talking about new female staff
- Disappointment
Day4
mini quiz during lesson
stayed back in school as didnt manage to do well for the exam
going out to shop and chat
Day5
no classes
sheryl visit ken house to study
went out with her to get buy lunch for parent ..
goes to work
felicia met some problem at her 2nd day
helped her out
home
Day6
no classes
went with darwin to see jesscia netball competition
jessica got injured
** jessicia birthday ...
we asked most of the friend to go for the birthday party after school ..
jesscia asked whther whose bday was it...
darwin then say its jesscia one and told her that she getting old and senile already until she forgetted it ...
both of their relationship improved ... =)
Day7
class together.. having math lesson..
sheryl asking helps from felicia.
felica got bullied during work
Day 8
Last supplementary lesson
went with felicia for lunch ..
felicia confessed
Day 9
TBA TBA !!!~~
End
** i know its sound rather crappy .. but well i havent spice it up yet haha expect alot of changes coming .. =) **
Spend some time to plan out first part of A Summer Vacation .. well changed the title to " A Summer Vacation - where journey of two begins "
Anyway this is some draft im making.. relax im hope that the character wasnt going to be like those in the draft. Lol wasnt even making an effort in drawing them earlier on as i didnt have any idea of how my characters will be like.. Well thats can wait.. firstly hmm the storyline
Here is the draft :
Click image to enlarge to full scale !
Yup i invert the color of it... well with that this only conclude like 3min of the storyline.. lol !! damn its too short.. more coming up haha
** Re editted..
ROFL i cant even read my handwriting OMG!! .. lawl
After Ken woke up .. he begin to change and went to school. On his way down from his house.. he saw Sheryl who was waiting for him.
Sheryl : Morning !!
Ken : " I feel something wasnt right.." Morning..
Ken : How come you here ?
Sheryl : Waiting for you (:
Sheryl : Haha so hows was yesterday night?
Ken : " What night? i wonder what i did.." ??
Sheryl : Oh nothing much .. anyway you got do your chem assignment ytd?"
Ken : " Hmm what assignment .."
Ken : " CRAP i didnt do them .. damn i think i left it in class .. lol anyway "
Ken : Oops i forgetten ..
Sheryl : icic i thought i could copy them from you
Ken : ... " Waiting for my answer =,= "
ok well .. this is something like a starter for them to speak .. anyway after both of them board mrt or bus to school together .. so will going to add more detail later on. Upon reaching the school .. well ken chiong the homework and sheryl just copied them .. well soon after awhile.. Chemistry lesson started and mr lee was going through what he taught ytd .. but sheryl was like sleeping in the class.. so most liekly mr lee is going to call sheryl to answer the question . and this is when sheryl will going to ask ken question .. and also this is when im going to give a choice for how ken going to answer her..
Either way .. mr lee will going to scold her for not paying attention .. and also this is when the paper scibble starts.. saying how she get irrated by ken lol .. then it somehow got ridiculous and they end up outside class.. well so for that day i try to intro both ken and sheryl first..
As for the others character such as Felicia and Rachel
Well .. im trying to make felicia into those type of girl that doesnt speak at all .. but instead communicate using paper and pen ..haha so i think this is going to be fun .. lol and also the way how she eventually work as a cashier .. hmm interesting .. anyway felicia is going to be that type of damn shy girl ..
Next Rachel .. hmm i try to reduce her age and part of her behaviour .. cuz by saying .. " You and Jack gaying huh.." well this totally spolit the whole image of her .. probably change it to " Nee chan.. you doing something strange in your sleep " Haha .. mroe innocent like type.. but not over did..
With that .. im left with the main story itself.. yawn... lol
Ok i updated it by adding somemore information. Thank to marcus for his ren-py visual novel creating engine. Anyway i still need to read abit and went through some tutorial on " How - to .." then im good to go .. but WAIT i still need to get the story up. Yup i have more than 1 month to do these.. but coming up with ideas and story wasnt a good point of mine as all i did earlier was to copy and change it .. modifying as you can say ..
anyway here a brief summary
Title : Summer Vacation
Timeline : May to September
Characters age : 16
Location : Singapore, Bukit Merah , Tiong Bahru , Queenstown
Type : School Life , Romance
Main Characters ( Sec 4 age 16 / TBA):
Ken -
Ken is the main male character as currently studying at 4E1. He was just like a so-so guy and didnt do well in his MYE due part time job! He dislike study as he think that studying much doesnt mean earn lots of money. He also do part time job during weekend at Singapore no1 supermarket ( i think you know what is it =) ) Also Ken is working part time togther with Darwin, Jack and later on with Felicia who joined later.
Felicia -
Felicia from class 4E3. She is like some quiet girl who didnt socialise much and been in different class. She doesnt know Jack, Darwin and Ken much. Later on during the holiday, she take a part time job together with them. Working as cashier and understand more of her classmate from others class through working..
Sheryl -
Sheryl is from 4E1
Sheryl is Ken's Childhood friend since Nursey and been same class with Ken almost every year. However she wasnt keen on seeing Ken as her potential boyfriend. She is outspoken and probably cause alot of attention to Ken since everyone know that Ken read her like book. Same as Ken, she did badly for her Chemistry and had to attend the supplementary lessons. Often come to Ken for answers. Live beside Ken's Block
Jessica -
Jessica from 4E3 and same class with Darwin and Felicia. She is your normal average looking girl but she is sporty and play netball. She is also Darwin ex girlfriend. Jessica is popular among guys as well ..
Darwin -
Darwin is from 4E1
Ken's and Sheryl primary school friend. He went to the same sec sch with Sheryl and Ken. He love playing sport and he is the school basketball player. Lots of achievement and often found flirting with girls from Netball as well as his junior. Like to show off in front of people by telling them how much relationship he got until now. Often hang out with class as well as with Ken and Jack. Currently doing part time in SG "Ichiban" Supermarket.
Jack -
Jack is from 4e1
He doing part time job with Ken, Darwin and Felicia (later on). He is obsessed with anime and probably an otaku. Love to add quotes from anime into his conversation and time to time will encourage people with Quotes. He didnt did badly for his mid year but attend the class together with them just to accompany them. Jack is also skilled in talking cock ..
Homo sub character ( TBA)
Rachel -
She is Ken's sister. She wakes Ken up every morning and often bothered Ken for many issue regarding to studies as well as to know more about Ken's friends.
** As for her age , probably put her into secondary 1 student bah **
Mr Lee -
He is the form teacher of 4e1. And taught Chemistry and also incharge of the supplementary class. Didnt really like arrogant people like Sheryl as he think she disturb the whole class. As a result love to pick on Sheryl to answer questions.
Uncle Jacopin(Pronouce as Jacob-pin )
He is the cleaner of the school. Know the students better than any of the teachers. He is popular among students and often jokes with the students around. His best di-siao method was to use sprinker on people walking past.
Storyline : Summer Vacation have begun as Mid year exam had ended. However couples had to attend for supplementary classes as they flung their MYE. ( at this point doesnt even some like vacation..)
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As for the starting of the story. I already came up with the idea althought i know it wasnt related to the whole story. Ok i currently got 3 ideas here .. all are dreams and two was on japan.
1-
Ken was at the airport waiting for his airplane to go japan with Jack. But later realised that he forget to bring his ticket .. then told jack to postpone the trip as its too late for him to go home and get the tickets. But Jack ps Ken and went straight ahead. However.. on his way back home disappointed.. he read on the news that the airplane crashed. Due to its some Tiger Airline or thai crap airline. Then shockingly .. ken scream !! " JACK~~~ DONT GO AWAY!!".
Somehow it happened that Rachel ( ken's sis ) was around .. and told ken " You and Jack gaying? " lol ok then the main story start ..
2-
Ken just arrived at Japan, Tokyo together with his school. Somehow gotten into some chats with others girl from his school. While chatting with them .. suddenly one onlooker appear with a butcher knife and wanted to stab the the girl beside him. But Ken go and block him .. but he got stabbed later on. Ken : " I DONT WANNA DIE YET!! IM STILL BLOOMING JYUU ROKU SAI!!" ARGHH then somehow he woke up ..
3- (different setting & i drew it (2 pages) out already .. so it would be easier for me to show it.)
Here its goes :
BAMM!!! * burning **
Soldier : " Sire Look like everyone is dead .."
Sire : HAHAHA!! killing civilian is at least 3x easier than hunting for food MUAHAHA
*** AHHHHH *** from nearby
Sire : " Look like someone still alive "
Girl : " FATHER open your eye dont leave me behind "
Sire : Haha a girl .. WHY NOT JOIN YOUR FATHER??!! " * then he swing his scythe
** CINLK **
Ken : " Hmm thats isnt a way of gentleman does.."
Soldier " ARGHHH KILL HIM "
after some weak attack .. ken go use some speical attack .. then everyone run away .. after that this is like your common scene .. whereby the girl thanked him and kissed him .. then ken kissed but kiss onto his pillow instead.. then this is when Rachel came and see and told him .. " Haha ni chan having some ecchi dream huh?? " lol
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So these are the 3 possible way of starting my story .. althought chances for me to use #2 is zero .. At leats now i got the background of my character up hmm haha ok thats all
Check this blog for details of my story
Storyline still in developing