It's 5.05pm and both Ken and Darwin was late for work. Upon reaching their workplace, both of them hurried to log in to the system.
" Crap we're late for 5 minutes..."
" Late is better than not coming right? Quickly log in, before Dennis caught us.."
As usual, they approach the system with care. But only to find out that the system was not responding.. Ken was getting impatient, and started to retry several time but this time round, the system was down.
" Tch.. seem thats the system is down .." Ken pointed out to Darwin
" Nah .. maybe its better if the system goes down, and we can fool Dennis that we are early and blame the syst- "
" Blame the system, nice try "
A familiar voice was heard right behind them. Its was Dennis, looking at them with his usual Default face, looking at them.
" Seem thats this system which didnt go down for 4 years, got down right at this moment...."
" mmMmmmm...."
" Hah Lucky? "
" Lucky your head .. I' switched off the system just now .. obviously you guys are late..."
" Cant you be as obedient like Jack who came earlier before 15 minutes before work?"
" Jack?" Darwin asked...
" 15 minutes before 5pm?? fifteen minutes before work? "
" One word .. Shocking..."
Just then, Jack walked into the office and surprised to find them over there.
" JAAACCCKKK ~~~!!!"
" .... ?"
" How come you came so early and why you leave earlier just now during the match?"
Jack look around observed them for awhile, as if looking for something...
" Hey Jack, is there something on my face ? or whatsoever.. whats with that looks.."
Darwin said that impatiently as he didnt give them any reply.
" Ermm .. Dennis, no one came today except those two? "
" JACCKKK!!! WHAT YOU MEAN BY THOSE TWO .." Darwin then yelled at him as anyone could possible do it at that time
Dennis, paused for a moment, thinking what Jack meant by saying that. But he cant think of any but to tell him that only those 2 worked together with him today...
" So you mean no new staff today?"
" Whats new staff..." 3 of them was asking as if that they didnt got informed about waht happen
" Come on Darwin , Ken .. remember what Alex said 2 days ago when Sheryl came ..."
"Alex announced to them that a new female staff will be coming tomorrow."
"Oh i remember it !! "
"Yeah .. Alex did mention about it...."
Now, 3 of them was looking at Dennis who is most likely to know whats in for them, however they only manage to get this answer, " Alex is not equal me .. whats he promised is by himself, not me and nothing to do with me as i didnt promised you ..."
" ........"
" So you mean that its just an hoax? " Ken asked Dennis, however Darwin questioned Jack whether was it the reason why he left earlier before the match ended.
" Jack .. so you mean that our relationship is so weak that you rather see some girl at work, on top of that, you didnt even asked us to go along... "
"..... ..... ...."
The conversation got so tense that, its wise not to speak anything currently and also that girl seem to be an threat to their friendship as well ..
Darwin got tired about it, knowing that there's no way any normal girl would want to work here.
" Tch,,, No girl mean no work ...
" Lets go home now...."
" Sure.."
" Boring ..."
"........." (dennis)
"PpppeeeeeeeeeeEeeeee~!"
The match had concluded, with Darwin's team winning, But neither Sheryl nor Ken knows much any details on the game as they didn't even pay any attention to it.
Darwin approach them, hoping to get some praise from them but to find out that they was too busy chit chatting away.
" You sure this is how they met?"
"Huh? who met who ??" Darwin begins to ask Sheryl
"Nothing... its about one of the anime Jack just said earlier.."
" Oh., by the way, hows you think i played? "
" Hmm .. "
" Don't "hmmm" me ..."
Knowing nothing about the match, Sheryl asked Ken for help so that she can reply back to Darwin. Ken then starts thinking about it...
" Just try to say that he did that 3 pointer nicely .."
" Nice 3 pointer you had earlier on..!!
" 3 pointer ??( I don't remember i had 3 pointer..) "
Seeing that their conversation isn't going smoothly, Ken stop their conversation by asking Darwin about Jessica
" Seem that the problem between both of you isn't serious"
" Since she DID came to look at your match..."
" Hope so....."
" By the way .. where's Jack? "
" Right beside .... "us" ? "
(Apparently, he was nowhere to be found..)
Shortly after, Sheryl receive a message from Jack, stating that he need to go off with his friend and tells Darwin and Ken to meet later for work.
This is one of the method to track down the progress of the whole game, also its help to provide a better understand on where and how far the event happened.
Well .. i think i "ripped" it off from some game, since i found that dates are very important to indicate your progress if not the players will have no freaking idea on where they are.
As for me, this helped to plan better heh. =)
"BAAAMM"
A heavy slap lands on Darwin's back, it was so hard that Darwin actually squat down, yelling at Jack for hurting him like that. That commotion caught the attention of everyone, whom wondered what had happened.
"The first thing to get her, is to wish for her. Giving up now is like giving her away... "
" ..... "
Darwin remained silence for a moment after hearing his words, he then, stand up again looking at Jack then look at Jessica.
"PpppeeeeeeeeeeEeeeee~!"
The whistle blew and the netballers stopped, the training had ended and the girls was dismissed.
" Hey, it's your chance now.."
" Now? "
" Of course , there's less people now.."
Darwin then approached Jessica but only to see Edward praising her for the effort she put in today. After he finsihed, Darwin then approached her and tried to start a conversation.
" Hi, good job there .. "
" Thanks.."
Before they even continued after these two lines, Edward interrupt them as he was shouting at Darwin
" Who are you to talk to her? " Edward shout that in front of Darwin's face
" How about you? "
Edward then started to get angry and punched Darwin's face. Even with his brusied face, Darwin replied , " So this is what a deliquent can do? Punching someone whenever he like ..."
Getting even angrier, Edward kicked and delivered several punches on Darwin. As the situation isnt looking good, Ken came in to stop them but he received a punch instead.
After seeing their "idol" got whacked by Edward, those girls then rushed to stop them and Edward got held back by the security guard, who questioned him of illegally accessing to the school compound.
After the commotion which had ended, Jessica came to look at Darwin
" Ermmmm.. I'm sorry "
" Nah its okay , i deserved that ..hahahah "
" Of course you REALLY deserved that, and whats was that for? "
" Whats you mean by "what was that for?" ? "
" By fighting with Edward? "
Darwin paused for a moment, thinking what to say but his answer was unpredictable
" so you will remember me ..."
His reply given the, a shock especially to Jack who was stunned after hearing it. That really unpredictable.. either it epic win or epic failure Jack said
" Yeah .. at least now i remember you
" The dumb guy who got punched today after the Training Session. hahah"
" Ya probably that bruised face guy who likes you..."
" Me ? I'm sure you got lots of girls out there ....."
" But you are the last one im will hang out with ..."
" Hah last one? "
" Anyway I'm Darwin from 4E1 .."
" No one asking for your name..."
".... "
" Anyway I'm Jessica here .."
"Thats all.. The rest you are able to imagine it already" Ken stopped talking and Sheryl who was least convicted about the story, interrupted
" Ken .. that's like so dramatic "
" It's up for you to believe.." Ken ended the story with that
** This isnt related to storyline lol ***
Anyway, its almost like a month since my previous post and i didnt update anything yet. And i'm not giving up on this story, either do i had any thought of ceasing this story ..
For these 30 days, i undergo quite a number of events and nonetheless, almost experiences over there can be used into this story which im writing now. Apart from the plot itself, i think i can write better now cuz i'm been reading stories written by others and understand abit of the writing style.
So .. the story continue =)
"Never mind i give up... its Jessica.." Darwin say it as he started to lose interest at Jack's tries.
"WHAT!?! Its really her?? " Jack wasnt expect that she was that girl who Darwin "eyed" on however he cannot doubt him again since he spoke only the truth when he was serious.
Ken who was looking at the netball court which is not far away from the bus stop. Glancing through the netballers, he manage to spot Jessica practising with her team.
" Hmm .. so that girl with the most guys looking at was Jessica .." Ken said while he was glancing at the netball practise.
" Yup thats the girl who love to scream so much and i didnt know that Darwin has fetish on girls who likes screams .. You know what i mean ..." Jack added as he give his grin at Darwin. Darwin then denied about those nonsense that Jack mention especially about that fetish.
" If Jessica is the girl you liked then you probably have to work hard especially she isnt lack of suitors .." Ken warned as he knew that its wasnt easy to date Jesscia who consider popular in school and he pointed at the direction whereby the crowd was.
"You saw that guy in red t-shirt.. he's Edward..." Ken informed Darwin who was still pondering about who is Edward and eventually he remember it. " Ahh our senior .. but why is he doing here? "
"Isnt it obvious .. he was like you watching at the girls .. and apparently he is interested in Jesscia as well .."
"Ah that Edward .. he's a bastard everyone knows how bastard he was .. breaking girl's heart over and over and playing them like toys... " Darwin replied but Jack interrupt Darwin by stating that Darwin is excatly like him .. toying with girls
Darwin ignored Jack and told Ken what he wanted to return back to the court .. and they returned back to the court, standing together with the spectators.
"!!!!!!!!!! " Suddenly there's a commotion between the netballer girls as everyone suddenly get excited as they saw Darwin watching them practising..
"Oww. Darwin seem like you're really popular.. " Jack said as he look at Darwin especially after that the practise was held for quite some time as the girls was looking at Darwin. But somehow Darwin doesnt want the attention he get and he walked away. Turning his head to look at the court again, he saw that some guys surrounded Jessica, prasing her for her good match earlier.
".. i guess i have no chance.." Darwin was rather disappointed as he saw how much attention Jessica got from the guys and he's couldnt stand a chance with her.
"PpppeeeeeeeeeeEeeeee~!"
The game came to halt as the coach blew the whistle.
"Thats all for today's training and well im sure that everyone wanted to go home especially there's only 10% of the people turned up ..." The coach said as he debrief everyone before dismissing the baskteballers.
"ARGHH YEAH FINALLY!!"
Darwin cheered as he finally manage to have a rest since he been playing alot of roles to make up for the lack of players during the training. As he glanced through the surrounding to reconfirm that everyone had stopped their training and somehow he sight focus at the end of the court where the Netballers are having their training .
"Haaa~!" One of the netball girl shouted as she slammed the ball toward the opposite team, as if that the shout enable her to play better. Their shouting goes on as they were practising against each other, this was when Darwin told himself that the location of the basketball court is excellent as it is SO near the netballers
As Darwin was looking at the netballers, his teammates gave him a push at his back and later disturbed him for looking at girls when he wasnt suppose to as the debrief have not finished yet...
"It wasnt me but it was what the coach want .." His team mate said and Darwin turned to face the coach, who was giving him a "are you happy now" looks, followed by finished eating?
"Huh? Did i even eat?" Darwin replied but he got back the reply from the Coach that made everyone laughed on the spot.
"Hmm Food for the eye i mean .. finished eating? If finished you guys will be dismissed now!" The coach then proceed to dismiss everyone and the team was now clearing up the basketball court.
" Haha Darwin.. nice one " His team said as they was clearing the court.. Meanwhile other was disturbing him by asking which girls caught his eyes and then followed by tons of girl names which Darwin seem to mention before ...
Another shouted " Darwin is going to yet, breaks another girl's heart .." So loudly as if to let everyone from netball or even the passerby to hear them ...
"Arghh Whatever .." Darwin walked swiftly away from them and returned the equipments..
Over at the equipment room, Darwin met Jack and Ken who was waiting for him and asked him why did today the training today ended so early and whats the commotion outside about. Jack later than mention that he heard "darwin going to break another girl's heart" while they were inside the room.
Darwin who got nothing to say pick up his bag and asked them to go out together with him. As he left the room .. one of his team mate disturbed him again about the name of one of the netballer girls. " So you mean you saw Jessica over there huh? " he said
Jack then overheard their conversation and disturbed him. While walking toward the school entrance, Jack keep on mumbling both Jessica and Darwin name..
" Dar dar and Jes Jes .." Jack mumbled. Ken added on that its will be better if he mention "Jes" first followed by "Dar" This time Jack mumbled " Jes Dar Dar ... Jes Dar Dar.."
"Fine talk all you want" Darwin reacted and giving them the whatever face as he start to quicken his pace. Taking it lightly both of them stopped as they dont really know about rumours and for Darwin to get into rumours is too much of a common daily stuff. Beside Jesscia is exactly the same as Darwin especially she is so popular among guys and like Darwin .. had too many rumours around in the school as well..
While walking toward the bus stop, Darwin questioned both of them , " Whats if i really like that Jessica.." Immediately Jack replied : " BEST COUPLE OF THE SCHOOL!! Top girl and Top playboy .. Woohoo " Ken laughed but then he mention that its going to be a joke ...
Darwin then started to get impatient as the reponse wasnt serious. Upon seeing Darwin flustered.. Both of them soon get serious.. and then Ken asked him whether which girl caught his attention...
" Ermm its rather obivous..." Darwin replied as he look away from them, followed up are Jack guesses of the girl name (again...)
" Nevermind i give up... its Jessica.." Darwin say it as he started to lose interest at Jack's tries.
"As you know that two years ago whereby we start staying back in school just to watch how Darwin played for his team. Somehow i dont think you went to take a look even though Darwin invited us. "
Sheryl replied : " Ohh secondary 2, im think im busy with school work ... "
" Anyway over than, basketball was not only the sport that have interschool - competiton but Netball have it too. Remember that the Netballer was using the area just beside the basketball court?
Sheryl agreed and keep listening to Ken's story ..
"You see.. i think the reasons that why our school basketball team always win in matches that hosted in our school ... " Ken spoken to Sheryl
" Because of the netballers? or we are too strong? " Sheryl replied
" Nah .. we are lousy just that others team who challenged us wasnt focus on the matches but more on the FBT Netballers .. Therefore they didnt manage to win us ...Hehh.."
Sheryl had nothing much to say that time.....
Anyway that is when Darwin met her that day after school ...
Soon .. the whistle blew and the match had started..
Followed by a heavy slap on Ken's back by Sheryl who was rather pissed with Ken for ignoring her the whole time before the match started.
"Oww..!! Thats hurt ..." Ken reacted and Sheryl said that , hmph~ that is what you deserved by ignoring your childhood friend and then she started to get back by ignoring Ken for quite some time.
Ken which will then willingly to tell Sheryl more about Jessica and why she is the main topic of today since Jack kept on talking about her. But Sheryl was not listening since she wanted to ignore him .. after a while Ken admit his defeat and Sheryl then listen to his "story" about Jessica.
" Well i wonder why you didnt know of Jessica from 4E3 .. she's your classmate" Ken questioned Sheryl who get frustrated back at him since she didnt know who is her, in response to him, she ordered him to tell more about her...
" Well .. Jessica is from 4E3 and from Netball as well..." Ken slowly talked about her but got interrupt by Sheryl as she already know about these details. " Come on talk more about her !! "
"Ok ok ok .. so you know all these so i think you dont know about one thing about her" Ken said it with confident... This makes Sheryl interested since he mention "one thing about her.." and in return she rushed Ken to tell her faster.
" I bet you didnt know that Jessica is also Darwin ex girlfriend .." Ken said it with a smile .. then followed by a tight slap on his back ... "OWWW!!! " Ken cried and Sheryl is now getting more pissed with Ken for going circle with her and it obvious that she already knew it beforehand.
Jack look at them especially hearing such a loud slap and then told Ken that this is what you get from sitting beside a level 70 dungeon boss with 5 intelligent .. Apparently Sheryl didnt know what he was talking about but she knew it was something bad about her.. Sheryl then stare at Jack as if telling him that he would be the next .. Jack freaked and before changing his view to the basketball court, he told Ken to have "fun" with this dungeon boss who had excessive energy due to her heavy breakfast and warned him that there is no way for him to use endurance method as she had the "energy advantage..."
Ken who already got nothing much to say after landing himself into this situation but then he knew that the best way to have a win-win situation is to tell her everything he knew and gotta to be serious..
Darwin who ready in his jersery and seem to be perfectly ready, turned and walked toward them ..
" Yos both of you ... i thought you forget about these.." Darwin greeted them and Sheryl took this chance to compliment on his attire. All these compliment makes Darwin blushed a little as he rarely received compliments from people around but Ken whose on the other hand said that Sheryl words are mean to be opposite and she was talking nonsense.
"Whatever the case ... i got to go to meet up with my team for last minute briefing and well .. you guys can get yourself seated at beside my battlefield.. " Darwin said it hastily and walked away.
Over at the basketball court, rows of chairs were lined up for the spectators however there are fews spectators which made up of elderly who were frequent visitors to the community centre as well as passerby and not to mention that majority of the spectators are adult.
Jack who then finding seat for them caught Jessica who was sitting there, messaging away with her phone. Jack turned to them and directed them of where Jessica is sitting. Sheryl who had no idea about on who is Jessica begins to ask Ken about her however Ken himself was thinking about the incident that happened to Darwin and Jessica and thus didnt noticed her.
" Hey dont ignore your childhood friend like that..." Sheryl exclaimed, just to get Ken attention, but yet Ken told Jack to tell her instead as he was busy thinking of ways to patch them up if possible.
" Fine .. ignoring me .." Sheryl who was rather pissed with Ken, seat down holding her hands and not looking at him. Jack on the other hand was telling her information about Jessica and how she is related to them and also told her that Jessica is Darwin's girlfriend and somehow their relationship isnt doing well at this moment. However he couldnt explain much about them since he dont really know much about her as well.
Seats was filling up as announcement was made that the match are starting soon. Soon the crowd cheered as both team was coming to the centre of the court, the court is somehow turned into a battlefield for both team as this match determine which team is going into the finals of the zone.
Darwin who was looking at us showing at how confident he was for showing us a good show during the match. However they were pointing somewhere else as if to see him to look over there. Changing his view.. he then saw Jessica over there and later point a thumb up for her. Jessica who noticed it , grasp her fist and move it up, telling him to do his best.
Soon .. the whistle blew and the match had started..
" I didnt knew that the CC here had competition here even though i live here for so long.." Ken said as he walk toward the event ground, together with Jack and Sheryl who is strolling leisurely behind him.
Apparently none of them has heard him and well Ken didnt talk much until they reached. Sheryl was then complain that she wants to get take a rest since she really had a heavy breakfast and all these walking had made her feel sick. Ken had nothing to say about Sheryl except to blame herself for landing to this state.
Meanwhile, Jack who wasnt talked much begun to look for Darwin but he had no clue on where to look for him since nobody can contact him during trainings or before match as he switches off his hand phone, so Jack went to asked them what are the possible place in the CC to look for him.
Knowing the obvious answer straightaway, Ken replied him that the most obvious place will be the basketball court! Somehow Sheryl said it at the same time as if that both of them were synchronize. Then both of them turned and look at each others.. before they start to talk, Jack interrupt
" Wah ! Same timing..." Jack interrupt as soon as he saw a chance to before he got embarrassed by not knowing about that obvious answer. This is then Ken and Sheryl started to argue about over it as both of them denied that they were " synochronize" in heart and soul like how Jack describe them ..
"Phew..." Jack sighed as he didnt got embarrassed by them and instead did back a counter attack.. He then proceed to the basketball court to look for Darwin. Meanwhile Sheryl, who was resting inside, accompanied by Ken since he got nothing to do, shouted Darwin name as she saw Darwin caming out from the toliet.
Darwin who ready in his jersery turned and walked toward them .. " Yos both of you ... i thought you forget about these.." Darwin greeted them and
( im sleepy .. lol ) *** continue tml
"Ahhh..~ What wonderful morning.." Ken said to himself as he woke up from his sleep last night. It's 7am in the morning whereby her sister was still sleeping soundly in her bedroom. It's a pretty rare sight since Ken was awake at this time while Rachel who suppose wakes up earlier than Ken, was still sleeping
While Ken was enjoying his peaceful morning, his alarm clock rang, he then went to his room to switch it off however he came upon Rachel who was holding onto her pillow outside his room. Rubbing her eyes as she was still half-asleep, she greeted Ken" Morningg brother.. zzZzz". and then move into his room to switch off his alarm. Ken then wonder why does Rachel had to went to his room just to off his alarm instead of sleeping inside her room.
This was when Ken recalled that he wasnt the one who switch off his own alarm and it was Rachel who does it every morning instead. Seeing Rachel switching off his alarm and she begun to pull Ken's blanket as if to wakes him up even though theres nobody there. Ken laughed as he recall how he undergoes this every morning.
Without getting any response from her pulling, the half-asleep Rachel then called out her brother name and told him that he was late for school, but she soon dozed off at his bed instead.. While Rachel was sleeping by his bed, Ken takes a look at her and then leave his room since he didnt want to disturb her sleeping. He closed the door to his room slowly and this was then Rachel stirred and begins to utter some random sentences in her sleep. " Wake up or you will be late..... Wake up ... wake up ken .. wake up zzZzz "
" Ahh~ Ok time for me to prepare my own breakfast" Ken told himself as he proceed to the kitchen to make his own breakfast. However, he wasnt familiar with ingredients either do he know how to make himself one cup of hot milk. Knowing the difficulties of making breakfast, Ken decided to make himself one simple breakfast consist of egg and toast and one glass of hot milk then he went to prepared the ingredients. At this moment when he start to heat up his toaster, Jack called.
" Yos " Jack greeted as he proceed on to remind him that he's required to leave early for Darwin's basketball competition and inform him that Sheryl and him will be meeting him 10minutes later
"What!! 10Mins??!!! " Ken exclaimed as he knew that this is too short of a time since he need to change and have his breakfast. Ken said it despite knowing that he havent even made his own breakfast yet.
Jack then replied that he only required to change since they will be having breakfast nearby before going. Upon hearing that, Ken was relieved since he dont have to make his breakfast and even he did .. it will be a crappy meal to start off his day. He then proceed to his room for changing.. however Rachel whos on his bed begins to rub her eyes. Then saw her brother beside him ..and greeted " Morning ... brother ..zzZz"
Ken greeted back " Yos morning ! " and shortly after that Rachel turns to look at the time now.
" AHH!! Sorry i woke up late !!! " Rachel said it as she realised that she dozed off and forget to make breakfast for Ken. Rachel flustered and tells Ken to change while she prepare the breakfast for him. However Ken shook his head and told her that she didnt need to since he will be going out for breakfast instead.. as he said that.. he closed his door and started to change
Ken then leave his room and reaching the living room. He saw the dining table with toast and 2 glass of milk for two. Ken said that its wasnt needed but Rachel insist that he should finished his breakfast before leaving.. " I doubt you can get enough of the food outside " she added since Ken eat alot every meal and normal serving cant satisfy him. As Ken was then "forced" to have his breakfast and knew that he was already late for the meeting with them. Finishing his last bite he then quickly bid farewell to Rachel and rushed down to meet them
" Sorry guys im late ..." Ken apologised to them however Sheryl on the other hand doesnt seem to be satisfy with that since he made both of them waited for awhile.. Ken explained to them that his sister was holding back and he cant get out without having the breakfast there.. Well either way , Sheryl then asked him that he should treat them as a apology while Jack had say nothing against her since he knew that stuffs will get complicated if anyone agrued with her.
After a short walk, they arrived at the food centre around the neighbourhood and Sheryl who get impatient during the walk, went straight to buy her food. She came back with one bowl of fishball noodle and this caught Ken attention as he trying to say that this is JUST a breakfast and no reason for her to go for a heavy one early in the morning. But Sheryl refused to listen to him and just tell him to pay her later.. Soon Ken and Jack proceed to buy their food after someone look after their stuffs. Both of them came back with some congee with you tiao and Sheryl who had finished her bowl of noodle mentioned that she got tired of seeing them buying youtiao with porridge every time. But they replied back that Sheryl got a monstrous appetite early in the morning
Soon after they finished their breakfast, Ken asked them whether where is Darwin compeition going to be held at.. Then Sheryl interrupt halfway and yell " !!! Wah !! You didnt know much of your best friend huh? Well anyway its somewhere here .. " Ken ,who got nothing to say much since he know what will come next if he opened his mouth, Jack added on that the match will be held at the CC ( Community blocks away from the food centre..)"
Together they made their way to the Community centre nearby...
.........
You're welcome" response .. he got this response from her instead " You owned me one xP "
"Ok thats all for today .. remember to finish your homework .." Mrs Goh announced as she dismissed the class
Later on, Ken, Darwin and Jack went to have a lunch at their usual place at the plaza (the one yesterday) This was when Jack asked Ken about hows going on with Sheryl, and Darwin explained it to Jack instead since he sort of understand the situation since Ken told him last night.
After that, they went to work.
Apparently, they were early for work and Alex who was in charge currently asked them that its so rare for them to come on time. Ken later on went to do his usual work by restocking items in the shelving. Apart from working.. they spend alot of time chatting. Unfortunately Alex caught them and asked Darwin to help him buy coffee nearby
Darwin : What the .. this one isnt required for my job
Alex : Well you can take your time ..
Darwin : Ok i get it.. be right back in 10min
Alex : Ok..
Darwin : i mean 30 mins
Alex : ....
Well, Darwin was gone and left with Ken who was finished his work got ordered to replenish the fresh department area.
Alex : Err Ken you left with nothing to do right?
Ken : ...
Alex : help go restock the fruits and vege .. thx
Ken : ( zzz did i say i got nothing to do currently...zz)
While he was restocking the fruits, someone tapped him and he turned back..
" Yos! ~ " A familiar voice was heard and Ken realised that it was Sheryl.
" Hmm someone restocking oranges..." Sheryl make fun of Ken and later on tested him about how many oranges are there in the boxes.
" How do i know its written 30 per carton .." Ken replied
" But but .. well this isnt right every time.. no body counted them right.. its like a glass of milk contain 200mg of calcium.." Sheryl interrupted
" ... " Ken sighed and later Ken turned around his head and look around
" What are you looking for? " Sheryl questioned
" For my boss .. oh well hes not here" Ken replied
" For what?" Sheryl asked and Ken replied that its was for her sake since she wanted to knew it
Soon .. Ken open up the carton of oranges and counted them as he restock them. While Sheryl was arranging them on the shelf .. " Hey dont help me like that .. later they think that im bully some girl into labor work.." Ken replied as soon as he noticed that Sheryl helped him.
However, Sheryl didnt mind at all and continue doing.. Halfway Ken interrupt and pointed at the carton and said " Wanna look at the wonder of nature.."
Sheryl was a bit surprised about what Ken asked but she is interested to know what is it in the carton. Sheryl approach the carton and this was when Ken patted on the carton and grey fine "smoke" covered the carton.
" !!! " Sheryl panicked.
As soon as the particles settled down .. 3 mouldy oranges was found and Ken laughed at the reaction of Sheryl ..
Halfway, Jack came out from the staff room and saw both of them there. " Hmm someone slacking at work .." Sheryl then replied that wasnt he slacking as well .. and Jack was like lost for words.
Jack later asked whether Sheryl wanted to do something fun since everyone had finished their job and Sheryl was still wondering about his question. Jack later explained to her that she can make fun of their supervisor, Alex instead.
Soon after their plan, Sheryl proceed to the wine counter and begin to asked for wine. This was when Ken pretend to approach Alex for help in this area."
" Yes Miss how can i help you? " Alex said politely
" Ermm do you have ermm .. the 1998 Merlot " Sheryl requested panickly as she didnt know much on wines
" Here you go this 1998 Travis Merlot " Alex replied as he pass her the bottle of wine..
" May i know which country is this from? " Sheryl replied as though she did this alot of time
Alex think for a moment and replied that its from Europe
While Alex was helping her, they hide behind the door and peep at them and laughed at the act done by Sheryl and the way Alex handling her requests
" I think Sheryl can go joined Drama Club instead.." Darwin said to Jack
" Ermm how much alcohol % does it have ..? " Sheryl requested again
" Miss, it stated here there 14% alcohol content.." Alex replied
" Hmm will that get me drunk? " Sheryl asked again
This time.. Ken who was beside Alex laughed .. and Alex who was trying to maintain his professionalism replied that it is is depend on how much she can take alcohol.
In reply to his word. Sheryl then asked some unrelated questions on Alex whether how much alcohol he can take without getting drunk and what type of wine is good before bed.
Alex : ( ......)
This is when Ken couldnt take it and went behind the doors and laughed there together with Darwin and Jack.
As soon as she ran out of questions for him, she then said that she was underage for alcoholic drinks and thanked Alex as she walked away ...
Alex was than storm into the office and complained about the fussy customer .. this was when Sheryl met them before she left and they tell how good her acting
Soon .. after Sheryl left .. the shop was closed for the night and they were waiting for in the office, waiting for Alex to sign off for them. Alex who was in the room "thanked" Ken for that wonderful customer he introduced to him and later then announced to them that a new staff will be coming tomorrow.
" Was it a girl or boy? " Darwin asked while Jack interupted by saying that the companies wouldnt employed girls and even its female.. their age wil be like super old for them and well this company is boring ..
Everyone agreed but Alex said what they will know tomorrow since tomorrow will be her first day of work ..
" Well .. i dont think im coming tomorrow especially if it gotta be another crap staff coming tomorrow .. " Jack said
" Well coming or not .. you all better come for to see my basketball competiton tomorrow" Darwin cut in..
After that all of them went home.
Main Characters
Ken
Jack
Darwin
Felicia
Jessica
Sheryl
Sub Characters
Rachel
Mr Lee
Uncle Jacopin
Naomi*
Edward*
Dennis*
Alex*
Andrew*
* denote the new characters
Well .. as i said hmm there will be no story if there isnt a villain because if that i had to add some villain into the story so as that my story wouldnt be like *boring*...
Edward -
He is currently 17 and he is ex student of Ken's School. Well he used to be in 4E1 the best class during that year. But his attitude is very crap and he is very arrogant. All because he manage to do well from his class, he liked to show off alot in class. Well he graduated by he do frequently visit the neighbourhood. Used to make fun of his junior whenever he met them.
Well .. since everyone dont like him .. so there is no reason for people to talk to him. Well since Edward will get bored by everyone ignoring him .. so he find trouble for them by complaining part timers unreasonably. Well he used to disturb about both Ken, Darwin and Jack while they were working. He just your typical type of bastard,
Naomi -
She is Felicia sister who attend same school as Rachel. She knew Ken through her sister when Felicia took her to her school fair and met Ken there. Well, although she did well for her studies but she still want Ken to teach him more, she is later found out that she prefer Ken as her brother.
She helped her sister,Felicia sometime to called Ken up. The most common thing she did for them was to called Ken and told her sister that her mother was calling and asked Felicia to answer. But the opposite turned up to be Ken at one incident and Felicia was like " Ermmmm..." I think you should know what i mean bah ...
Dennis -
The manager of the company which Ken,Darwin and Jack worked for. Well he supervised Ken and Darwin in their job. He had the default face of "Serious" well thats his default face and made everyone to scare of him at the beginning.
Alex -
The supervisor of the company. He supervised Jack for his work. Well since Dennis got too busy as a manager, most of supervision was done by Alex who likes to catch people to do jobs for others department. Often joked around with his staffs
Opps.. i stopped for quite some time.. no inspiration at this moment but after hearing my neighbour next door playing on her piano .. well inspiration kind of struck me on how to begin the second day ..
" Hmm what pleasant melody. I guess today will be great !" Ken said to himself as he raised up slowly from his bed. He then stood discreetly behind his sister, Rachel who is playing on her piano elegantly.
Rachel finished the piece and breathe out as if she had done something magnificently. Behind her, was Ken who was clapping for her. " Well good piece down there!! I didnt know you played so well .." Ken praised her but reply from Rachel was that she blamed Ken for not staying at home oftens as he could already know what pieces she playing.
" Well well .. anyway thank :) but you are going to be late for school !! " Rachel replied and Ken discovered that he was late for school and immediately rushed to change his clothes.
" Dont rush !! Anyway breakfast is already prepared for you .. heh.." Rachel joked and Ken quickly finished his breakfast and hurried to school.
Apparently he was late for his math lesson.
" ermm Mmmorning Mrs Ggoohhh =) .." Ken greeted the Math Teacher.. but apparently he got scolded by her and got ordered to return to his seat immediately. He later wondered where Sheryl was but realised that she doesnt need to come for this lesson as she told him about yesterday..
Since Ken forgetted that Sheryl did not come .. well he also forgetted to bring his lesson material as well .. Mrs Goh got nothing to say except to tell him to figure out himself. The first thing that came into his mind was to quickly find someone to share it with him.. therefore hastly he sit beside Felicia.
As Felicia was that type of super shy girl, she panicked when Ken suddenly sit beside him. Well she was totally lost at her reaction. Anyway Ken didnt know about her, he saw her often in school but didnt talked to her before, so he greet her..
" Morning!" Ken greeted her using the most common sentence..However Felicia didnt reply him at all.. This was when Ken questioned himself whether she was ignoring her or didnt heard him.. so he greeted her again. But theres still no answers from her.
* scribble * *scribble*
A handwritten words by Felicia soon appear at the foolscrap in front of Ken. Ken was kinda surprised that she used that to reply him .. and for Ken.. he didnt knew that Felicia was so shy.. but nonetheless.. he intro himself and she intro herself as well .. yup all in written form.
While they were "chatting" halfway, Jack threw bits of rubber to get his attention. Ken then look back at Jack who was holding onto the paper which written " Someone ..Lovely dovely in action .." Ken was then like showing to him that its not happened to be what he was thinking.
On the other hand.. Mrs goh took this chance whereby both of them was not listening to class, asked Ken a question on Math. Apparently, Ken didnt manage to even understand what the question ..
" Omg im dead .. damn Jack basket ...zzz" Ken thinking of whats going to happen to him as everyone fear the prowess of Mrs Goh. Just then.. Felicia tapped Ken on his pant and he look down, well basically what he saw saved his life (for now..)
Well .. whats written by felicia was some super detailed answer about the math question and Ken even wondered how she wrote that so fast ...
Again.. as usual he thanked her for it but instead of getting the " You're welcome" response .. he got this response from her instead " You owned me one xP "
Well class ended and Jack and Darwin Ken went for work together ..
**Author note :
Well didnt manage to write some quality stuffs today .. i need to take note on my english now .. doesnt seem to be as good as the previous ones.. and also i'll be editing them soon as well soon after i introduced a new character ..
As for now .. Rachel is the name of his sister and yup the Day 2 # 2 will be on their work =)
" DAMN YOU !! KILL HIM !!! " The soldiers later charged at him ..
Ken did a loud roar and the body of the soldier freezed as their instinct tell them that its impossible to defeat him because of a obvious different in their power levels. And they seem to get ready to flee but was unable due to the fear in them.
" So now you should know the difference between you and i. I should let you go if you promised if you leave the girl safely behind."
The soldier reconfirm his request as they understand that it better to avoid this obvious winning without any loss of life.
"HAH!!!" The man behind laughed as if he wasnt even affected by Ken. Smokes surrounding him got thinner and the warrior with scythe appeared. " Lord Sire !! " the soldier cried. Ken then prepare to be on his guard as he knew that what lie ahead of him wasnt anyone like the Grams Soldiers but someone who is way above them.
Even with his heavy yet hardy scythe , Sire managed to leap up in the mid air with ease. Swinging his Scythe from the mid air at Ken, he came crashing down. He missed Ken but the earth which his scythe strike had just got flatten.
Soon, the battle between Sire and Ken begins but Ken's magical attack seem to be not effective against him. While fleeing, Ken manage to grab hold of few seconds to cast his icy bolt onto Sire but Sire's scythe slice through them like cucumber meeting cleaver..
"HAHAHA!! I wonder how long you going to avoid me ! This is futile !! You aint only the only magic user" Sire boasted and his hand got behind his back and glowed. Meanwhile Ken was no longer able to move..
" Crap a binding skill at this distance !" Ken panicked and this was when Sire approach him pointing the scythe at him. He laughed at Ken and told him that its over for him and for the girl ..
Ken at this time .. knowing what the situation he got and have little choice but to break the bind and to escape but unable to save girl if he does so. However after some time breaking the bind without letting Sire knowing.
Ken immediately flashed toward the girl and cast some magic around the girl. Soon ancient runes appears around the girl. However the magic circle was not formed yet and Ken was still casting it " Damn i got no time for everything .."
" HAHAHA I praised you for able to break my bind after taking so long .. but you still an amateur at spell casting" Sire approached Ken who was now beside the girl, preparing to cast the magical barrier around her.
Within seconds, the magical sphere was formed. It wasnt only just a simple protective barrier but also one that transfer people to others location. Ken ordered the girl to stay away from battles and told her to live her own life in other country. However the girl questioned him about whats going to happen to him. " Dont worry about me .. Ken replied followed by the scythe slashing through his body.
" NOOOOOOO~~!!! " The girl scream at the sight however she just now transferred to a safety location.
" I guess this is over " Ken said to himself and was now physical injured as well as he lost his will in fighting..
"Time for me to end this fight i mean this coward show. You wasnt even worth to be my opponent " Sire then swinge down his scythe at the severed injured Ken.
*POOOFFF* Before the scythe reach him, he vanished (pixelified ..)
"Hmm how warm this place is .. and i didnt know that heaven was this dark and glowing red. "
"Maybe i end in hell instead.. hahahaha .. .." Ken said to himself.
" Time havent come for you young man" a old man voice echoed the hall. It was Elder.
" I thought you said you got no enough energy for place shifiting spell.." Ken asked in surprised..
" Mind you young man, as you said .. im a triangle ranked elder mage.. dont you think that being among the few highest ranking mage, that i do not have enough energy for all these.. hahahaha .." the Elder laughed.
Later on being treated by his healing magic... the girl suddenly rush into the room and hug onto Ken.
"Miss not at this time.. he was still not recovered yet .." Elder said but Ken didnt mind at all .. The girl thanked Ken for saving her life and then bend toward Ken's face.
Both their eyes met and the girl later bend down and kissed him as a thank for rescuing her.
Ken didnt know how to react but to close his eyes.
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Well this had just ended .. yup the first part of the story had ended ..
P/S : Well good guys dont always win .. as hero always do foolish stuffs .. see impulse almost killed him ..
Audience reply : WTF DOES THIS GOT TO DO WITH SUMMER VACATION ???
This part occur at the very beginning of the whole story when you press > Start
The town of Travis is now engulf in the flames as soldiers of Grams had attacked it and set the fire to the whole village. The Grams Soldiers spare no mercy to the women and the children as they marched from towns to towns.
Triangle ranked mage of Travis who was showing this scene to Ken.
" What can i do to save them? " Ken questioned the mage as he cant bear to see them dying off like that.
The triangle ranked mage replied to Ken that its is already too late to save them as the town was already being engulfed by them and theres no one left for him to save.
Back at the town. The soldiers was enjoying the sight of the village burning and the suffering of the people.
" Sire.. seem like that this town is just like the previous ones HAHA!!" one of the Grams soldier exclaimed.. and another was saying that killing women are at least several times easier than hunting down wild animals for food.
While the soldiers was boasting.. suddenly a a sharp scream from a woman was heard from the town. Upon hearing that, Sire claimed that anyone who able to come back with her head will get rewarded by him. After this was commotions among the soldiers who later rushed into the town to hunt for that girl.
They finally found her crying beside a male corpse. She was holding onto the corpse and cried " Father!! Do not left me behind .. Open your eye please.. " Those sadist soldiers now began to surround her and that girl was now totally lost in what to do as she knew that she will be killed just like her father in no time.
Ken who currently on the other dimension saw it what happening. He then begged the mage to let him saved her.
" Elder .. let me save this girl she is going to get killed soon .." Ken begged..
However his elder refused as he said that its not worth risking his life just for saving someone if who is going to get killed and its too dangerous for him to solo all the Grams soldiers
" I dont care .. even if just only able to save 1 person.. im willingly to do so as its still counted saving a life . This is what you teach me since young" Ken replied without hesitant.
Elder finally agreed that he lets him go but later warned him that teleporting magic used up alot of his energy and its not possible to transfer him back after that. This posed a risk for Ken as he might not be able to return if he didnt manage to solo all the soldiers. Despite the warning , Ken insist that he wanted to go.
" You left me with no choice.. Go for it my child " as the elder opened up the magical portal for him. In lightning speed.. Ken dashed toward the portal.
Meanwhile at the town.. The soldiers who was surrounding the girl.
" ARGHH QUIT WHINNING!! WHY NOT JOIN YOUR FATHER " One of the soldier shouted and swinge down his halberd at her.
" GRRRAAAGGHHH~~~!!! " Somehow the halberd was holded by some invisible force and it break into 2 halves ..
" Hmm attacking female wasnt what a man should do.. " Ken said it as if he was so confident about winning it..
" DAMN YOU !! KILL HIM !!! " The soldiers later charged at him ..
P/S :
" Element of Ice. Bestows me your power. Anicent Vresh # XII Time Freeze!" Kah Beng chanted and the everyone got freezes halfway ...
" Hmm, lets wait until tomorrow for the battle .. im sleepy now .."
As for odex subtitle .. they probably love to do this " * chant * *chant*
Well i think i better confirm the age of Rachael now.
Well she is currently 12 Primary 6 and studying at the primary school same as her brotther, Ken. Anyway seem like her teacher know well enough of these siblings.
Background : At the point of time, Rachael PSLE examinations are coming in just a few months time. However she somehow got some personality from her brother as she didnt like to study and most of the time was browsing through manga and animes. Even though she didnt like to study but she can manage her studies well and often get distinctions for her subjects.
Character : Very Independent..Likes her brother alot, Ken as in sibling .Anyway like to to tease her brother alot by asking him question regarding girls in his class.
However .. Rachael herself didnt know much about her further studies and always hope to find some good guy to leech off lol.
Family life : Spend most of her time at home practising on piano. She stay at Ken's room oftenly when he is not at home as that is her source of her anime and manga. Currently their parents was not at home as they was having holiday oversea, therefore as a only female in the house, Rachael had to prepare breakfast and meals for herself and her brother. She is also the one who wakes Ken up every morning.
Ken - Rachael : Well they are sibling !! Anyway Ken oftens asked her stuffs about girls whenever he cant figured out what girls really like / dislike. Also Rachael will be able to watch animes and manga through Ken even though Ken dont really like her to get addicted to it.
Current events that relate to her :
Primary School Fun Fair,
Her piano competiton
PSLE
Last night was doing some graphic using Adobe Illustrator
Ok here is the menu of it
All i can say .. its still very very raw.. currently doing character design as for the clothing. Well been doing some sketching of uniform this morning.
Well i chosen Henderson Secondary School uniform .. since the story will be based over here.. and if it could be weird if i used salior style uniform.. Well currently change the realistic drawing into chibi form but not yet into electronic copies.. and only currently done the Male uniform .. cuz i dont have the girl sample.. not in my head though .. unless someone send me photos of hss girl uniform ..
Wouldnt it be freaking weird if i asked for it.. hey can i have a photo of you wearing your school uniform =) both front and back photos.. hmm
thats all .. using adobe illustrator to make the and color the uniform .. cya
After both Ken and Sheryl got kicked out of class by Mr Lee as they was disturbing the whole class.
Sheryl then tell Ken thats these type of punishment was very common as both of them got into trouble during primary school as well. Ken agreed and talk about one of the time when both of them got caught in cheating during spelling / dictation test. Both of them laughed.
* the following will be conversation *
Sheryl : Haha seem like this wasnt our first time back here again ..
Ken : Yup.. thank to you though..
Sheryl : You still remember during primary school .. whereby we always got kicked out in class ..
Ken : Yea.. not we got kicked out .. but in fact you the one who always land me into all these trouble...
Sheryl : haha ..
Ken : I still remember that time during primary 4 when you asked me for help during spelling test..
Sheryl : !!!
Sheryl : Oh that " personal " word
Ken : Yup that word which teacher caught us cheating and kicked us out of the class like now
Sheryl : Well lucky she didnt inform our parent
Ken : I killed you if she does =)
Ken : Anyway after that spelling test.. i saw you writing "Pencil" instead
Sheryl : Yeah cuz you didn't pronounce it properly
Ken : No! you the one who tell me how to write " Pencil "..
Ken : Hoho lousy poor hearing skills hmm.. but i know the word is "personal" though
Sheryl : Then why did you tell me !!??!!
Ken : Haha remember that our spelling test used word from the list given to us .. and pencil is not in there . I think you dont even bother to read it ..
Sheryl : heeh.. but writing them on spot seem to train me even better
Ken : yeah when you barely pass the test =.=
Sheryl : Haha so i can depend more on you heh..
Ken : ...
After some time .. Mr Lee called them back in. This was Jack told Ken whether they having some good time outside when Mr Lee was blabbering away. Darwin later int erupt by saying next time drag me down also .. yawn at his class..
After Mr Lee told them about the next lesson will have a Mini - Quiz. After that they were dismissed.
Together .. they went to the nearby plaza for lunch. As the food court was rather crowded therefore Sheryl had to book the seat for them and in return they will have to buy the food for her. But Sheryl didnt asked for what she want to eat.. therefore they asked her what she want
Darwin : btw what you want to eat
Sheryl : anything
Darwin : dont anything me okay? rice or noodle , western , soup?
Sheryl : noodle then
Darwin : specific thank =)
Sheryl : Ask Ken .. he should know better
Darwin called for Ken
Ken : What i buy for you?
Sheryl : ok if not nice then you have to pay for it wahahha!!
Ken : ...
After they came back buying the food .. somehow Ken bought meepok for her and she didnt like it and end up that Ken got to paid for her .. but he didnt and later on lead to a quarrel among them and somehow she end up going straight home. Soon after ken , jack and darwin finished their lunch and all of them went back home.
While ken was at the MRT platform.. he saw sheryl down there sort of waiting. But Ken didnt approach her..
Train arrived and both of them were in the same cabin but they didnt even talk.. after they got down in the same station.Ken approach her when both of them was walking on the path on their way home.
Ken : hmm sorry for just now.
Sheryl : ...
Ken : Sorry i didnt know you dont like meepok
Sheryl : ...
Ken : " How do i response ... she was like keep ..."
Sheryl : Actually there i like meepok .. but i was joking .. and wanted you to pay for me xD
Sheryl : and seem that i overdid it .. =/
Ken : ** i see i see ..**
Sheryl : well anyway you still remember that i like meepok
Ken : of course.. i cant remember any day not seeing you having meepok lol
Shery : haha glad that you still remember ..
Ken : huh?
Sheryl : ** oops i talked too much ** Anyway lift waiting for you .. byebye !!
This is when ken was confused about sheryl's word earlier on ...
Upon reaching home.. Ken was checking whos online .. and he received a message from Sheryl about that they should forget about today .. and half way Sheryl asked him about how to do the homework as she was not listening in class ( as usual..) ''
Ken : " Phew i thought she was serious that time .. "
At the evening, Ken went to jog at the park around his neighbourhood to relax. While jogging he met Darwin. Asking why Darwin was jogging at this time ..
Darwin said that his basketball competition was coming soon around this week and required to practise now.. This is when Ken asked himself whether why Darwin shd be training with his friend instead of running here. Well anyway Darwin later told Ken about Sheryl and asked whether things went fine between them. Ken replied by saying that it got settled and Darwin used this time to di-siao him about the power of childhood friend .. Ken got irritated and talk about darwin and jesscia. But Darwin later said that he didnt in good term with her as they agrued recently .. Ken later told him that he will try to help him out if he can ..
Anyway thats about the Day 1 . =)
This is a summary about whats going to happen in the story itself.
Start
Day 1 ( 1st June )
Going to school for supplementary lesson ..
- Sheryl's Past
- Ken's Past
Hanging out together at Tiong Bahru Plaza for movies and chats
- Ken Quarrel with Sheryl
Evening walk around the park
- Meet Darwin
- Darwin talks about his relationship problem with jesscia
Day 2 ( 2nd June)
Early morning
- Rachel's Playing waked Ken up
- Rachel's profile
- Realised that Ken is late for school
Going to school for supplementary lesson
- Late for Mrs Goh lesson
- Didnt bring material
- Had to sit with Felicia
- Intro Felicia
- Mini quiz that Mrs goh tested Ken
- Felicia helped Ken
Went to Work
- Sheryl came to disturb them
- Sheryl impost as customer and give Alex trouble
- Alex annoucned that new female staff coming
Day 3 ( 4th June )
Darwin's basketball competition
- Sheryl, Ken , Jack went to have a look
- Meet Jesscia
- Intro Jesscia's past about Darwin
- How Darwin meet her
- How Darwin get her (lol..)
- Jack left earlier
Working
- Ken , Jack , Darwin went to work
- Late for work (as usual)
- Talking about new female staff
- Disappointment
Day4
mini quiz during lesson
stayed back in school as didnt manage to do well for the exam
going out to shop and chat
Day5
no classes
sheryl visit ken house to study
went out with her to get buy lunch for parent ..
goes to work
felicia met some problem at her 2nd day
helped her out
home
Day6
no classes
went with darwin to see jesscia netball competition
jessica got injured
** jessicia birthday ...
we asked most of the friend to go for the birthday party after school ..
jesscia asked whther whose bday was it...
darwin then say its jesscia one and told her that she getting old and senile already until she forgetted it ...
both of their relationship improved ... =)
Day7
class together.. having math lesson..
sheryl asking helps from felicia.
felica got bullied during work
Day 8
Last supplementary lesson
went with felicia for lunch ..
felicia confessed
Day 9
TBA TBA !!!~~
End
** i know its sound rather crappy .. but well i havent spice it up yet haha expect alot of changes coming .. =) **
Spend some time to plan out first part of A Summer Vacation .. well changed the title to " A Summer Vacation - where journey of two begins "
Anyway this is some draft im making.. relax im hope that the character wasnt going to be like those in the draft. Lol wasnt even making an effort in drawing them earlier on as i didnt have any idea of how my characters will be like.. Well thats can wait.. firstly hmm the storyline
Here is the draft :
Click image to enlarge to full scale !
Yup i invert the color of it... well with that this only conclude like 3min of the storyline.. lol !! damn its too short.. more coming up haha
** Re editted..
ROFL i cant even read my handwriting OMG!! .. lawl
After Ken woke up .. he begin to change and went to school. On his way down from his house.. he saw Sheryl who was waiting for him.
Sheryl : Morning !!
Ken : " I feel something wasnt right.." Morning..
Ken : How come you here ?
Sheryl : Waiting for you (:
Sheryl : Haha so hows was yesterday night?
Ken : " What night? i wonder what i did.." ??
Sheryl : Oh nothing much .. anyway you got do your chem assignment ytd?"
Ken : " Hmm what assignment .."
Ken : " CRAP i didnt do them .. damn i think i left it in class .. lol anyway "
Ken : Oops i forgetten ..
Sheryl : icic i thought i could copy them from you
Ken : ... " Waiting for my answer =,= "
ok well .. this is something like a starter for them to speak .. anyway after both of them board mrt or bus to school together .. so will going to add more detail later on. Upon reaching the school .. well ken chiong the homework and sheryl just copied them .. well soon after awhile.. Chemistry lesson started and mr lee was going through what he taught ytd .. but sheryl was like sleeping in the class.. so most liekly mr lee is going to call sheryl to answer the question . and this is when sheryl will going to ask ken question .. and also this is when im going to give a choice for how ken going to answer her..
Either way .. mr lee will going to scold her for not paying attention .. and also this is when the paper scibble starts.. saying how she get irrated by ken lol .. then it somehow got ridiculous and they end up outside class.. well so for that day i try to intro both ken and sheryl first..
As for the others character such as Felicia and Rachel
Well .. im trying to make felicia into those type of girl that doesnt speak at all .. but instead communicate using paper and pen ..haha so i think this is going to be fun .. lol and also the way how she eventually work as a cashier .. hmm interesting .. anyway felicia is going to be that type of damn shy girl ..
Next Rachel .. hmm i try to reduce her age and part of her behaviour .. cuz by saying .. " You and Jack gaying huh.." well this totally spolit the whole image of her .. probably change it to " Nee chan.. you doing something strange in your sleep " Haha .. mroe innocent like type.. but not over did..
With that .. im left with the main story itself.. yawn... lol
Ok i updated it by adding somemore information. Thank to marcus for his ren-py visual novel creating engine. Anyway i still need to read abit and went through some tutorial on " How - to .." then im good to go .. but WAIT i still need to get the story up. Yup i have more than 1 month to do these.. but coming up with ideas and story wasnt a good point of mine as all i did earlier was to copy and change it .. modifying as you can say ..
anyway here a brief summary
Title : Summer Vacation
Timeline : May to September
Characters age : 16
Location : Singapore, Bukit Merah , Tiong Bahru , Queenstown
Type : School Life , Romance
Main Characters ( Sec 4 age 16 / TBA):
Ken -
Ken is the main male character as currently studying at 4E1. He was just like a so-so guy and didnt do well in his MYE due part time job! He dislike study as he think that studying much doesnt mean earn lots of money. He also do part time job during weekend at Singapore no1 supermarket ( i think you know what is it =) ) Also Ken is working part time togther with Darwin, Jack and later on with Felicia who joined later.
Felicia -
Felicia from class 4E3. She is like some quiet girl who didnt socialise much and been in different class. She doesnt know Jack, Darwin and Ken much. Later on during the holiday, she take a part time job together with them. Working as cashier and understand more of her classmate from others class through working..
Sheryl -
Sheryl is from 4E1
Sheryl is Ken's Childhood friend since Nursey and been same class with Ken almost every year. However she wasnt keen on seeing Ken as her potential boyfriend. She is outspoken and probably cause alot of attention to Ken since everyone know that Ken read her like book. Same as Ken, she did badly for her Chemistry and had to attend the supplementary lessons. Often come to Ken for answers. Live beside Ken's Block
Jessica -
Jessica from 4E3 and same class with Darwin and Felicia. She is your normal average looking girl but she is sporty and play netball. She is also Darwin ex girlfriend. Jessica is popular among guys as well ..
Darwin -
Darwin is from 4E1
Ken's and Sheryl primary school friend. He went to the same sec sch with Sheryl and Ken. He love playing sport and he is the school basketball player. Lots of achievement and often found flirting with girls from Netball as well as his junior. Like to show off in front of people by telling them how much relationship he got until now. Often hang out with class as well as with Ken and Jack. Currently doing part time in SG "Ichiban" Supermarket.
Jack -
Jack is from 4e1
He doing part time job with Ken, Darwin and Felicia (later on). He is obsessed with anime and probably an otaku. Love to add quotes from anime into his conversation and time to time will encourage people with Quotes. He didnt did badly for his mid year but attend the class together with them just to accompany them. Jack is also skilled in talking cock ..
Homo sub character ( TBA)
Rachel -
She is Ken's sister. She wakes Ken up every morning and often bothered Ken for many issue regarding to studies as well as to know more about Ken's friends.
** As for her age , probably put her into secondary 1 student bah **
Mr Lee -
He is the form teacher of 4e1. And taught Chemistry and also incharge of the supplementary class. Didnt really like arrogant people like Sheryl as he think she disturb the whole class. As a result love to pick on Sheryl to answer questions.
Uncle Jacopin(Pronouce as Jacob-pin )
He is the cleaner of the school. Know the students better than any of the teachers. He is popular among students and often jokes with the students around. His best di-siao method was to use sprinker on people walking past.
Storyline : Summer Vacation have begun as Mid year exam had ended. However couples had to attend for supplementary classes as they flung their MYE. ( at this point doesnt even some like vacation..)
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As for the starting of the story. I already came up with the idea althought i know it wasnt related to the whole story. Ok i currently got 3 ideas here .. all are dreams and two was on japan.
1-
Ken was at the airport waiting for his airplane to go japan with Jack. But later realised that he forget to bring his ticket .. then told jack to postpone the trip as its too late for him to go home and get the tickets. But Jack ps Ken and went straight ahead. However.. on his way back home disappointed.. he read on the news that the airplane crashed. Due to its some Tiger Airline or thai crap airline. Then shockingly .. ken scream !! " JACK~~~ DONT GO AWAY!!".
Somehow it happened that Rachel ( ken's sis ) was around .. and told ken " You and Jack gaying? " lol ok then the main story start ..
2-
Ken just arrived at Japan, Tokyo together with his school. Somehow gotten into some chats with others girl from his school. While chatting with them .. suddenly one onlooker appear with a butcher knife and wanted to stab the the girl beside him. But Ken go and block him .. but he got stabbed later on. Ken : " I DONT WANNA DIE YET!! IM STILL BLOOMING JYUU ROKU SAI!!" ARGHH then somehow he woke up ..
3- (different setting & i drew it (2 pages) out already .. so it would be easier for me to show it.)
Here its goes :
BAMM!!! * burning **
Soldier : " Sire Look like everyone is dead .."
Sire : HAHAHA!! killing civilian is at least 3x easier than hunting for food MUAHAHA
*** AHHHHH *** from nearby
Sire : " Look like someone still alive "
Girl : " FATHER open your eye dont leave me behind "
Sire : Haha a girl .. WHY NOT JOIN YOUR FATHER??!! " * then he swing his scythe
** CINLK **
Ken : " Hmm thats isnt a way of gentleman does.."
Soldier " ARGHHH KILL HIM "
after some weak attack .. ken go use some speical attack .. then everyone run away .. after that this is like your common scene .. whereby the girl thanked him and kissed him .. then ken kissed but kiss onto his pillow instead.. then this is when Rachel came and see and told him .. " Haha ni chan having some ecchi dream huh?? " lol
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So these are the 3 possible way of starting my story .. althought chances for me to use #2 is zero .. At leats now i got the background of my character up hmm haha ok thats all
Check this blog for details of my story
Storyline still in developing